Talking: Episode 9 - EvelioZGroup

Chapter 9: Why I Love Him by EvelioZGroup

Gumball: *Angry in tone* You all knew this was coming. It was only a matter of time before we got here. Well, now we are! We are at a freaking Evelio story. Now, you all are probably wondering why I'm so angry at that? Why I'm so angry that we're at one of his stories. You all know there good. Hell, you could say there fantastic. So why am I mad? Well, it's not the fact that they're bad, but the fact that they're so good.

I hate to admit it, but I love making fun of the stories I review. I do. I really do. Makes me feel like I'm the one mocking the person instead of the other way around. I mean, as a critic it's my job to find one thing to complain about in the thing I'm review, but if I'm doing one of his stories my job get super, super hard. You try finding a mistake in his stories beside the occasional spelling error. It's hard. In fact, I can't seem to point out any in this story. Of course, I did just skim over it in a minute. Maybe if I read more into it, it would allow me to pick out something I can make fun of. So let's not waste time. This is Why I Love Him.
In this story he gives us an explanation on why perhaps Carrie has a crush on me. …I'm sorry, but already I have to say that this sound good. I mean, I've always wondered where the whole fan base for this couple began. Heck, I wonder how the couple began in the first place. This actually tells us of it.

So already I haven't been able to make one joke about this. Uuuuhhhh. This is going to be the longest short chapter ever. Longer then in the last chapter when moved into Anais's room. Yeah, I actually moved in there. It wasn't pleasant. And believe me when I say I wish there were a lock on the door, but I digress. Let's get started with our….s-t-o-r-y. So we start off with Carrie in the lunchroom.
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Carrie was sitting alone by herself in the lunchroom. She was thinking about Gumball when he let her use his body to handle her "food" issues of her just being a ghost. Though she thought after that was over, she wouldn't much care for Gumball anymore, but something crossed her mind about him.

"before I went inside of gumball to eat food for the first time in years, it was great. Though I thought after we stopped it, we would move on, but I stopped feeling miserable. When I was in his body, I felt like I belong. Like this was something that just clicked between me and him, but ever since then, I started to feel something about him and I don't know what it is." Thought Carrie.
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Gumball: I still have nothing. So far it's just a simple plot building on itself. Like a good story should be doing. So let's continue to see if there's anything else.
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She started to get a bit woozy, even for a ghost. She grabbed her plate and threw it out, but then she saw Gumball, talking to Darwin. He looked calm, but she knew that she didn't care, but then she went to the trash and threw up. She didn't know why, but continued and continued. That was until she felt someone helping her out with that issue. She turned, but her vision was a bit blurry and saw someone. Then she got her head out of the trash can and didn't see who, but escorted her out of the cafeteria and then to the nurse's office.
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Gumball: …..What? you think I'm going to make a joke about her vomiting into the trash can. Well, normally I would; IF THIS WAS A BAD STORY, BUT NO! I can't make fun of this because this is just part of the plot development. I mean, I can't make fun of Carrie being sick to her stomach. He clearly explains that she feels that way because of the experience that she had with Gumball….eh, me. If that was not clearly explained and there was a plot hole where that line was then I would make a joke, or act sarcastic to it, but since it was explained I have to leave it be. So let's continue more and see what's next to read.
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When she got there, she was still a bit woozy, but was still conscious. Then she saw that she was sitting in a chair waiting for something, but turned and saw that it was the nurse's office, at that moment she thought that something happened, but then remembered that she threw up. Then someone came of the door and then she saw that it was Gumball.

"Gumball?" Said Carrie, not sure what she saw was real. Gumball looked at her and grew smile of her, "Carrie. You're awake." Said Gumball, going to her and kneeling down next to her. Carrie turns a bit, and then faces Gumball. "What happened?" Asked Carrie. "Well you started to throw up and no one wanted to help, so I ran to you and then you fell unconscious and I had to get you to the nurse." Said Gumball.

"Why did you do it?" Asked Carrie, Gumball signed at her, but shook his head a bit, but was smiling at her. "I did it because I'm your friend and I care about you." Said Gumball, looking at her straight in the eye. Carrie thought he was just saying that, until he said something that made more sense, "You see, when you got in my body…it felt right. I didn't understand it, but I felt that you may be more than someone I would just know at school." Carrie smiled at him, "You're smiling." Carrie knew that she was and didn't care because she shared it with Gumball.

Then the nurse came out of her office and called Carrie, and then gumball got up and said that he had to go now. Carrie accepted it and as he was walking away, the nurse said "You are one lucky person for having a friend like that." Carrie smiled and said, "I know." She later knew what she was feeling, it was love and she knew that she wants to share it with only one person and that was Gumball Watterson.
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Gumball: …..AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH HHHHH….. AAHHH…..AAHHHAAHHHAAHHHAAHHHAHAHAHAH AH!

Anais: *Walks in the room* Gumball. Not that I'm not used to you screaming like a little girl for no reason, but do you mind keeping it down! I can't hear myself think !
Gumball: No. I refuse to. I mean…AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!

Anais: What are you even screaming about anyway?

Gumball: This story. I can't find anything wrong with it. Everything's explained, nothing is left un-answered, It doesn't drift away from its main idea. I can't do anything with this!

Anais: So you're mad because a story that you're reviewing is perfect.

Gumball: Yes…well, no….. I mean; I don't know. I guess I'm happy that there is nothing to complain about because then people know it's a straight forward story that make sense, but I'm not happy because I didn't get to insult anything. I mean, that's what I do. I'm supposed to read these stories knowing that there's something wrong with it, but with his I know that everything's right with it. I can't be a sarcastic, smart-alack if there's nothing wrong. It just makes me sound like a jerk.

Anais: Well then just don't do another one of his stories; at least while you're here.

Gumball: I can't do that. I can't just exclude him. I mean, his stories are…. To.. good to pass over. Yes, although I can't find anything to make fun of in his stories he still is a great author and has contributed to the site in a huge way. Giving us stories like The Circle and Slenderman, and his most popular I Killed Penny Fitzgerald; one of the few bloody stories that I actually like and don't think is stupid. Even some of his least popular stories don't have anything to make fun of. They may not be as review worth as others, but they still have their own sort of way to make you enjoy them.

Anais: So what are you going to do to make it so I that I don't have to hear a little girl whining anymore because I'm not going through 30+ stories of you yelling at your computer screen.

Gumball: Well, I could do this. *holds up a hammer and wings at the screen.*

Anais: Well, you cracked the screen, but the computer's still up. Anyway, Gumball left the room to get over this situation so; until next time. Bye, I guess.